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FANFICTION // Hollow Souls -- part ZERO

Series: Star Wars, post-NJO
Characters: Jacen Solo, Tenel Ka, some OCs to be introduced later ;D
Rating: PG (for kind of creeptatic)
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters! They belong to Lucas! I just play around with 'em and torture 'em a little (or a lot, depending on the circumstances). ;)





part 0: THE END

This is the end.

I sit here breathing in and out, quite heavily, I might add. It comes out in a cloud which drifts away with the icy draft that seems to wrap around me like a blanket of Hoth snow. I sit, huddled in the corner of the parlor I seem to have stumbled into, my back is pressed against the wall, my hands are numb, my eyes are wide.

I haven't seen Tenel Ka since the motions we made to each other through the transparisteel wall of the main hall -- I hadn't even spoken to her then, we couldn't hear each other.

I lost her.

We can't find our way back to a place where we can meet up, this whole place is a madhouse. Who knew a building existed with so many rooms. Who built it?

Who inhabited it?

I wanted to find these answers when we first stumbled upon it. But now I just want out. I want Tenel Ka and I want to get out of here.

But instead I have this girl, no this young woman. Her hair looks like fire, her eyes look like ice and she's just standing there -- she's standing there staring at me. She looks familiar... I try to ask her questions. She just moves her mouth, slowly, extremely slow... like she's chanting or something. I can't make out what she's saying. I can't feel her through the Force, I can't feel anything. It's blocked somehow. I'm blind. I'm cut off and blind. My shoulder is still bleeding and I'm still crying blood -- I'm blind.

But I can still see her.

And now she speaks. I can hear.

"You're the one who killed me."


I know this is short. It's the prologue kind of thing. XD Tomorrow the first part will be up, and it'll be longer/more normal length for me. BOOOHA.

Comments

Hey, yay for Jacen's angstbot self!

Frakkin' creepy last line. This is going to be fantastic, I know it is.

~Carr
ANGSTBOT, ATTACK! XD Heeeehehe~

Thank you! *hugs* I hope I can get everything tied in perfectly so that last line seems even creepier once the story is over. ;D
Daaannnnnnnnnnnnggggg I love. Ooh creepy. I'm not one much for horror stories/movies, well, stories aren't as scary, but am looking forward to reading more. *hurries to catch more up on LJ*
Not to worry, it'll be more mental/imagery and thoughts -- odd things that happen. No gore or cheap horrorness. ;D (I hope I can work it out that way, at least. Hehe~!)
Oh good... I don't like gore. Ewwww.

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